"Go kill yourself.", "Why are you still alive?' Imagine when you receive those comments anonymously. How would you feel? A 12-year-old girl, Rebecca Ann Sedwich killed herself after being tormented online and cellphone with those comments. This implies some connections between the anonymity and cyber bullying. People are getting cruel easily when they hide behind the shade of 'anonymity.' Consider writing a comment as throwing a bomb from airplane. People might throw a bomb mindlessly because they don't see the suffering they cause. But the bomb is fatal enough to kill the victim. Bullying which existed in the real world now spreads its branches out to the cyber world. And cyber bullying is getting cruel more and more thanks to anonymity. The anonymity absolutely has an impact on cyber bullying.
1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by giving real malicious comments. Then I pointed out the seriousness of cyber bullying which is getting serious due to anonymity.
2. Explains the topic -
I explained the connection between anonymity and cyber bullying through metaphor.
3. My thesis -
The anonymity absolutely has an impact on cyber bullying is my thesis statement.
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